32. (Bonus) This comic was very challenging. I had alot of fun but Im gonna need to take a break to complete some commissions. Im disappointed in how much I needed to abridge the story to get to this point but Im excited for all of the things that I have…

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32. (Bonus) This comic was very challenging. I had alot of fun but I'm gonna need to take a break to complete some commissions. I'm disappointed in how much I needed to abridge the story to get to this point but I'm excited for all of the things that I have planned and no longer need condense it. Raine and Sun will be back soon with their journey through the Forest of Wonderment. Thank you everyone for reading. . . . . #inktober #comic #art #fantasy #instaart #drawing #ink #fun #original #story #sketch #forest #adventure #mystery #cat #spirit #myart

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3 months ago

I think this is a nice, succinct beginning! I don’t think it feels over condensed or anything! It introduces the characters and their central conflicts really well. It’s a really good thing in my opinion for a fantasy story to not get bogged down in lore, ESPECIALLY at the beginning. This pacing was good and interesting - I could see it playing out like a 30 minute episode in my head as I was reading!👍